Monday, October 22, 2012

Final Draft For Rhetorical Analysis


Colin Garlock

English 191 Section 17

Jack Hennes

October 15, 2012

Social Warfare

            Sexual orientation and marital bias is the most recent form of social warfare. It is in the forefront of debate and conversation even though some say that it is an uncomfortable subject. Although an uncomfortable subject there are those out there who fight for and against this topic day after day regardless of how uncomfortable it makes some people. The subject is gay marriage. One man on the frontline of this battle is David Blankenhorn, a writer for the New York Times and author of the book “The Future of Marriage” and was an active member in the proposition 8 court hearings. David says that marriage between same sex couples is not to be condemned, instead to be recognized as a different form of union with similar intentions.
            The article starts out simply enough with the author saying that he once opposed gay marriage on simple principles such as lack of biological ability to create a child, and that the child has a right to be raised by those individuals that committed to each other. Once this is explained David goes on to say that he is a marriage advocate and that it was time for him to switch his views on gay marriage. This ability two realize the facts, think about what he believes and alter his opinion based on those facts speaks wonders on his deduction abilities. Not only was this impressive because its hard to believe that anybody would switch on a topic they were so sure about it speaks wonders to his ethos or credibility in his topic. David was speaking against gay marriage in the courts while proposition 8 was becoming a law to vote over, soon after his opinions changed, as a writer for the New York Times he is aware to how far his words travel in the hearts and minds of her readers. Besides being a writer for the most famous magazine he is a published author on the topic of gay marriage. Aristotle teaches that to believe peoples influential words we have to look at three things one of them being the credibility, whether or not this individual should be trusted and recognized as a person with valid ideas and thoughts. David obviously meets those guidelines as a credible source for people to follow.
            Credibility or Ethos is just one of the three rhetoric devices, another one of these is Logos or the logic behind the arguments. The most interesting aspect to this genre of argument is that it is difficult to misconstrue the intension of the rhetoric. The only problem is that with social situations it hard to be very logical with opinions and feeling because people are so sensitive. This is were David really shines with his arguments they are easy to follow and logically sound even though it is a subject that is heavy on opinion. The first of the three big points David makes is that “the time for denigrating and stigmatizing same sex marriage is over, that recognizing that same sex marriage and their children is a win for basic fairness.” (Blankenhorn 1) After analyzing this statement it is apparent that his point is that those who are different should not be put down for only that reason. The point is that in our society does not put down on people on the basis for who they are or what they believe, so on that point he is asking why is it ok to put down on them were it has never been ok to do so before. With every other social issue it takes time for the issues to settle and for those who oppose eventually give way to what is right, and David is sitting and waiting for those people to finally realize and switch like he himself has already done. His second point was equally thought provoking and persuading. In one word describes a reason for this Idea to be understood and that word is comity. Mutual courtesy; civility is the meaning behind this simple word. David’s point here is that we must all live together side by side with some level of respect for one another’s lifestyles and choices. No one has the right to limit each other to what we want and believe in, “taking a firm stand and never changing is admirable but bending the knee in the name of comity is not the same as weakness.” (Blankenhorn 1) Some would even say that’s admirable. In any situation compromise and understanding is the only way to get to the bottom of any difficult situation. David’s third point is the only one he prefaces by saying and my third point, which lets the reader, know as to the importance and profundity to the statement. Reading this it is clear that he holds his punches and sets up this article relying heavily on this point as both a persuasive point, and as a defensive wall to battle even the most stubborn on this subject. The third point that he is most happy to employ is the emerging consensus, the bubbling up of harmony in this subject. The point here being that people are already coming around to realize that gay marriage is an acceptable idea and practice. This point relies heavily on the fact that people are generally conformist and want to go with the group and that so far more and more support for gay marriage has been appearing. The younger generations have been in favor for gay marriage although some might say they are wrong on their merits but surely it matters.
            The most surprising aspect of this article was surely the fact that a social issue like gay marriage was lacking in the appeal to emotion. Logos was very prevalent in this paper. Were Pathos or appeal to emotion is very lacking although there are some strong points in this department it is quite surprising how overwhelming the logic is and how lacking the emotion is. The authors point may have been that emotion is over used in this instance and was trying to use his incredible deduction skills in a new way to approach this subject, by shining different light on the subject maybe it would be seen or perceived just as different. The author is however very clear when making a claim on emotion, this is very obvious because his first real explanation using emotion says that the debate should be mostly on the fact that marriage is to promote healthy relationships for children, so in short marriage makes good parents. He goes on to say that the debate is not about this at all that it is about the ludacris idea of accepting gay people as equals, this point is very hard to swallow instantly the ideas of suppressing people for how they feel and the way they are is fundamentally wrong as history has shown. This point was the first example of emotion used so obviously he knew how powerful point this was to use it at the end to make sure people understand how emotional a topic this is. He does not use this for shock value he says this is the case because he himself once argued this same point, and he realized why this was not a logical fight he was fighting with emotion that was fundamentally wrong and eventually switched. This was not his only point in the emotion category this was just the most persuasive. Another strong appeal to this point is that the debate over this subject was to show that the institution of marriage is not as stable as everyone may think, but this has not happened. This shows that people are not even recognizing this concept all they see is to fight the people based solely on the animus and not the issues facts and ideas. Marriage is not so stable each year more and more children are born out of marriage so limiting this based on the fact of children is a weak argument. Arguing that fighting gay marriage will somehow help marriage is not a sturdy argument because if that statement were true then we would have seen the benefits by now. His final appeal to amend this whole situation is by saying that, the fight for gay marriage is a waste of time not only will it eventually become acceptable but that there should be a new coalition of gay people who want to strengthen the institution of marriage and straight people who want to accomplish the same goal, this idea of coming together to solve the problem instead of playing tug of war is the only way to find common ground. When people come together to solve problems has usually resulted in mutual benefit between both parties. And a world were everybody is happy is a utopian idea that is appealing too most.
            The analysis of this article by using Aristotle three examples of rhetoric Logos, Pathos, and Ethos has been very eye opening and has provokes many good ideas for gay marriage. This New York Times writer not always in support for gay marriage but has realized that gay people have every write to marry is obviously a well spoken, and written advocate for this subject and is respected. He evokes emotion by playing at the fact that we are all equal and that if it were up to you as an individual would want the same respect they are asking for. He also made very logical arguments about the implications and intentions of marriage and how that gay people can be every bit as deserving of marriage as anybody else. With any form of social issues eventually those who oppose realize why they are wrong and kick themselves for believing what they did.





Works Cited
Blankenhorn, David. "OP-ED CONTRIBUTOR; How My View on Gay Marriage           Changed." The New York Times. The New York Times, 23 June 2012. Web. Oct.          14, 2012.


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